First thing that stands out is your pack which is a little over 56.5oz( a little over 3 1/2 pounds) you could also do better weight wise( zpacks, Mountain Laurel Designs, Sixmoon Designs, Tarptent to name a few )  on the tent or do you need a double wall tent for some reason ? I think there are better more fuel efficient alcohol and esbit stoves Trail Designs  for instance, your trowel is heavy the Duece of spades is .6 oz
Here is some general info for you to look at that I post for newer members(maybe you have seen it I don’t know) SUGGESTED GEAR LIST ETIQUETTE
Mike Clelland(NOLs instructor and author, his books are very good),he has some great free videos on lightening up be sure to watch(his clothing system,the entire contents of his pack,water treatment and part 1 and 2 on the dinky stuff for ideas),this is pmagsBackpacking: A Beginners Primer, Lightweight Backpacking 101, Jack of All Trades gear and The Frugal Backpacker – The $300 Gear Challenge alsoThe Budget Backpacking Kit.These are some other articles and videos for you to check out
MY 11 LB GEAR LIST FOR $207 TOTAL
Backpacking for Cheap: Gear for the Gearless
Backpacking Checklist (Gear List): 3-Season, 3-Day
Lightweight Backpacking 101: An Introductory Manual for Lightening Your Load Today (1st Edition – August 2001)
Cheap Ultralight Gear List
You Can Get An Ultralight Backpacking Kit At REI!
Oregon Field Guide: Ultralight Hiking
Lightweight Testimony: Lighter, Farther, Faster
Jamie Shortt talks about his progression and shows his gear list for each stage,Lightweight Testimony: My Journey into Lightweight Backpacking
CleverHiker Light weight Basics
CleverHiker Trail Skills
Adventure Alan 9 Pound – Full Comfort – Lightweight Backpacking Gear List
Adventure Alan Quick ways to reduce backpack weight
Andrew Skurka has a very good website with trips and gear lists for you to check out, here is a talk he gave at google
Ultimate Hiking Gear & Skills Clinic
His book is worth checking out also
The Ultimate Hiker’s Gear Guide: Tools & Techniques to Hit the Trail
Why “waterproof” shoes will not keep your feet dry
Minimizing the effects and aftermath of wet feet
LAYERING FOR BEGINNERS
THE BEST CLOTHING COMBINATIONS FOR BACKPACKING OR HIKING?
A NEW PARADIGM FOR UNDERSTANDING GARMENT WARMTH
Andrew Skurka’s Core 13 Backpacking Clothing
Dave Chenault’s response to Skurka’s Core 13
On hiking in winter
Dave’s All about insulation
Dave’s 30s and raining: some suggestions
You can get little repackaging containers(like the ones you see in Mike Clelland uses in his videos) many places including your local stores and pharmacy but here are some examples
USPLASTICS
USPLASTICS
.Mountain Lite Gear.
GossamerGear
MountainLaurelDesigns
. Litesmith .
You could make toothpaste dots like Mike C. shows or there are Archtek Toothpaste Tablets so only bring exactly what you need in a snack size bag for any given trip instead of a whole tube and THESE are good for little thing like pills, toothpaste tablets ect. so you are not packing a whole bottle(you can also get them very cheap at most pharmacies)
Your list really does not look that bad, It is more about enjoying yourself, so welcome to BPL and enjoy