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Ken Thompson BPL Member
PostedJul 3, 2012 at 8:20 pm

Did it have to be a McDonalds? So nasty. It kind of fits the general feeling of that intersection though. I think a good taco truck could make a killing there.

Love the line about your partner's packing strategy.

PostedJul 3, 2012 at 9:16 pm

Great writing. I especially enjoyed the flashback to imagining the mother showing berries to her child and then back to present-day McDonald's.

Duncan Cross BPL Member
PostedJul 5, 2012 at 2:43 am

I like your brief references to the beauty of your walk tucked away amongst the main story line.

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