If you’re looking at 2.5 layer jackets with good ventilation, another jacket you might want to consider that’s reasonably priced is the BD Stormline Stretch Good length coverage with pit zips at 282g/9.9 oz. About $110 on sale. The pockets are on the low side so may fall under your hip belt if you find yourself often using hand pockets on rain shells.
Patagonia has a 6-7 oz 3L shell without pit zips called the Storm Racer that was made for trail running. I just handled one and it’s really thin. Not sure if you want to trust it for the first time on a very wet multi-day trip. If you try it I’d size up one size from your typical for a bit better length coverage and layering room.
I’ve had a Marmot Precip fail pretty early on years ago and it may be that they are hit or miss due to uneven production quality. I used the Montbell Peak Shell for years and it never wet out. With pit zips came in around 12 oz in a large. There are similar models in the Montbell line that took its place. I’d say it was reasonably breathable – more breathable than the Patagonia shell I wore before that, but the Peak’s pit zips and front zipper always provided far more breathability than the membrane.


