If you’ve got the Quickstep in mind as a model for your straps, then no, that won’t work, but there are other paradigms.
Check out the Exped Lighting: http://www.exped.com/usa/en/product-category/backpacks/lightning-45-lichen-green
Their system could be readily adapted to a single strap on a single stay for a two stay design like yours. I’m thrilled with my Lightning and think they’ve come up with a brilliant system.
If your shoulder straps terminate in a piece of webbing at the top (I believe Zpacks do this), that could be sewn to the sleeve before the sleeve is sewn to the back panel. (I’m assuming you’ll be using webbing as sleeves.) An external reenforcement patch could be added to the back panel ahead of time if desired.
Given that your stays are only a half inch wide and your straps are likely 3 or 4 times that wide, you could arrange for each strap to straddle the stay, attached to the back panel on either side of it.
Pending the angle of your stays and the curve at the upper end of your straps, you might be able to attach them adjacent to the stay sleeves.
I’d go with the Exped paradigm. It can be made simpler and lighter if it’s not adjustable. It also proves you don’t need full length sleeves – fewer needle holes, less tape, lighter, more water proof.